The conquest of ambiguity
Language is
inherently ambiguous, but the classic-prose writing style entails minimizing
conceptual ambiguity. Because precluding foreseeable confusion is the essence
of communication, the highest form of clarity is univocality (unambiguousness).
This isn’t widely understood, as this anecdote
illustrates:
In a Stanford artificial intelligence theory class, while the prof tried to present relatively precise claims, students constantly asked if he was really trying to say distantly related claims X, Y, or Z. My exasperated friend cried "Why can’t they just treat it like math – assume nothing you are not told you can assume!" ("Against Disclaimers.")
To treat natural
language as if it were an artificial language, as the anecdotal lecturer demanded,
is an unhelpful suggestion because readers can comprehend only by drawing on
information that seems relevant, and apparent relevance depends on the reader’s background information and
intelligence. But it also depends on the writer’s univocal expression. Since more
able to detect them, the intelligent reader may be particularly confused by
ambiguous cues.
The quest for
univocality isn’t confined to avoiding words with unwanted associations (and
issuing the necessary disclaimers if that isn't possible). It rests primarily
with emphasis, through means such as the new
topic/stress principle, the brevity
principle, and unobtrusive repetition. It also involves avoiding every
manner of self-contradiction.
Varieties of clarity
The great irony
in contemporary writing advice is that all extol “clarity” but none is clear on the term’s meaning. The
consequence of the nearly universal failure to appreciate the different varieties
of clarity causes writers to ignore some of them—particularly the most central,
univocality.
These are the
three varieties of clarity in writing and their definitions:
Fluency: Understanding the argument’s detail with
minimal effort.
Rigor: Understanding the argument’s detail with high effort.
Univocality: Conceptually unambiguous understanding
at all effort levels.
These
distinctions are pragmatic rather than logical. They describe varieties of
clarity furthered by different strategic choices, which advance one variety of
clarity and often undermine another.
Clarity and construal level
You may be
struck more by the dissimilarities between the varieties of clarity, and you
will then wonder why anyone would use the same term for all of them. The common
element in all varieties of clarity is their reference to the amount of
relevant information conveyed, the distinctions between them concerning the
amount of effort required (low or high) or the kind of information (detail or
disambiguation). One obstacle is that we seem only to think of clarity as
meaning one or another of its varieties, the most common interpretation of “clarity”
being fluency: clear writing is understood with ease.
An analogy might
help. A drawn picture will show clarity of the fluent variety when the details
can be taken in with a glance; of the rigorous variety to the extent it
contains all relevant information, leaving little to guesswork or intuition:
and of the univocal variety if it doesn’t
look like anything other than intended.
The varieties of
Clarity have a peculiar structure predictable from construal-level theory (as
I’ve construed it). The theory varieties of clarity can be generated by
crossing required effort with construal level:
Since effort—allocated
in near mode—doesn’t vary in far mode, univocality depends only on construal
level being abstract. The features of each variety of clarity point to how each
relates to effort level and construal level. Cognitive fluency is promoted by simplicity; I’ve previously discussed its limitations
and offsets.
Rigor must be applied selectively.
Readers use subjection to rigor as a guide to meaning, so being unnecessarily
rigorous about some point distorts. Rigor is governed by two of the philosopher
Paul Grice’s Maxims:
2. Don’t be more informative than is required.
Disclaimers reclaimed
Univocality is
the highest stage of clarity which—its skills developed later—comes to govern
the other varieties. I’ll conclude with the starting topic, the disclaimer,
which has been the victim of some bad connotations due to its legalistic abuse.
Disclaimers serving only to comply with (supposed) legal requirements are deplorable
from the standpoint of univocality: conceptually superfluous disclaimers are
not innocuous, as they distort the intended meaning.
Whether
due to skill limitations, audience resistance, or nuanced message, sometimes
univocality is furthered by disclaimers. Artificial intelligence, the anecdote’s
subject, exemplifies a topic subject to both resistance and preconception,
where conceptual disclaimers further univocality. An example of a disclaimer
occurs in the present entry under the subhead “Varieties of clarity”: “These
distinctions are pragmatic rather than logical.” Readers can judge whether it
was helpful.